I DO

I DO

A Poem by Yellow Butterfly
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Yellow Butterfly

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    • I love writing poetry.. I do

      Because I love writing about you...

      I love writing poetry.. I do

      Because I love reading it back to you..

      I love writing poetry.. I do 

      Because it makes my mind come alive...

      I love writing poetry..I do

      Because it's what makes me thrive... 

      But if there is one thing I love the most..I do

      Is....knowing you love my poetry too...

© 2012 Yellow Butterfly


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i loved the emotion and the way i do was repeated in it

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love it , we all write for ourself , but we also love others to read and enjoy :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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how sweet..the repetition of 'i do' makes it light hearted and free.. lovely my friend

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thank you Kruppz our review is much appreciated!

"I Do" is a personal poem, simple and to the point for whom it was intended!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Thank you Kruppz your review is much appreciated.

"I Do" is personal to me but I have chosen to share on writers cafe.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is too direct to call it my taste. Even otherwise it can be better. Improvise.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 5, 2011
Last Updated on April 10, 2012