My First Sonnet

Yellow Butterfly

My First Sonnet

Hip Hip Hurray today 

I'm writing my first Sonnet

What to write what to say

What  follows is a little snippet

A new challenge to try a new style

 Things to inspire me whirring around my head

This one isn't looking to bad, sure to make you smile

A witty little bit of poetry, not saying it's well read

I feel I'm getting the hang of the Sonnet style

There is definately lots of room for improvement

Am I really ready to add this one to my profile

I'm not too sure the reviews would be brilliant

But for now it's been so much fun

Wow, is this really a sonnet, I think my work is done!

Reviews

[Yellow Butterfly]

Light hearted fun..... we can all learn from the best whilst developing our own unique styles.

[nitacl]

This is a cute poem! By George I think you've got it!

[Tai Ryens]

Kind of random, well, that's just my opinions. I never actually liked these sonnet's and Haiku's, and things like that, because I simply do not like putting limits on poetry. It should go as far as the heart can take it. Well, your views must be far different from mine, great job on this one though! Keep writing, you'll improve with time!

[J Todd Underhill]

The rhyme scheme is spot on! You are getting the hang of it!
Should try a Villianelle as your next one :)