My first Haiku

My first Haiku

A Poem by Yellow Butterfly

 



























Sudden gust of wind

Dancing leaves over landscapes

 Existence of total harmony

© 2012 Yellow Butterfly


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sitting among the leaves and experiencing this would be very meditative and bring a moment of peace. great poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Just look at that piccy!... a golden moment... captured by camera... and poet!
*bird*

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very delightful, conveying nature perfectly.

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Posted 13 Years Ago


Wonderful! such a bliss, and beautiful for the time of the year!

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Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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you worked it!!!

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Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awe this is so wonderful and sincere.
Totally loved this write. Awesome job done!

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Posted 13 Years Ago


Good one. I like the image of the dancing leaves and the sense that Nature's ways are part of the harmony of the universe..

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Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Never tried ... but its beautiful :)

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Added on November 17, 2011
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