You're all of me............

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

It's the way you look at me drinking me in...

Your gaze burning through me

consuming me whole as you

cast your spell

encompassing my soul...

As you lay here next to

me not touching me not

caressing me yet you’re

sending waves of desires

to a place deeper

than the ocean...

You’ve taken me to

a darker region

of my existence that I could

never have imagined.

Radiating an aura liken to an

angel emanating light...

You set my pulses racing

as my breathing

becomes shallower and

laboured

making my heart swell...

My body aching  and reveling from

this wonderful intrusion. 

Mystical, magical and sensual

I just want to feel your touch.

Yet, just watching you watching

me lying next to me is enough...

You’ve not captured part of me

but all of me as I fall freely

and willingly engulfing myself into you

absorbing my life into you,

giving to you my every thing...

It is because of you,

why I feel whole....

 

 

 

Reviews

[Jibey]

Lovely and intense thoughts flowing from the excitement and stirrings of a loved one's closeness... Interesting that the effect of these words is felt by the reader, so that it seems the poet is setting the pulse racing, is breathing hot excitement into the reader's mind, is arousing the inner desires...

[Bare trees]

A powerful description of an occasion not to be forgotten anytime soon. Very nicely done.

Some oceans can be deeper than others, specificly the Atlantic Ocean.
It's a sea of loving tides in time I read. I wonder only if they shall meet...

Excellent! E.L.

[Alessander]

very sensual and metaphysical...the cynical part of me wants to dismiss this, but I'm in a good mood today, and just allowed myself to believe such an experience exists, if only fleetingly...

[Lily Mae]

I love this..passionate and hot.. sexy for sure.. :) xo

[Hotwater]

Sexy write, just the right amount of sexiness... it simmers at the perfect temperature.
*bird*

[Robbie~xoxo~]

You are back!... This sizzles! Your words definitely radiate sensual aura off the screen...Well done!

[Kruppz]

Wow. Nice. Sensual. I appreciate erotic poems.

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thank you EMF..... just changed the font :O)

[EMF]

Hot Damn. It was a little hard to read because of the font, but I'd put that down to cataracts than your choice. It is such a personal and sensual work that you shouldn't change a thing. It is perfect as it is. A truly wonderful work that begs to be read and re-read. Wonderful