Broken Smile, Broken Lives

Broken Smile, Broken Lives

A Poem by Poetic Solace
"

There was no way for me to save them... I tried but, I failed

"

"We smile for the casual, closure, capturing..."

 

 

Spoken words never meant to much to me

Spoken lies never went through me

I never had believed

That you would speak those words

"There's no way you can reach me, I'm already dead inside."

 

I didn't believe it.

Maybe in a few weeks things will go back?

Who knows?

But, for now,

My tears can fall down

My heart can drop

And my soul can plummet into Oblivion

 

I couldn't save you...

I couldn't save them...

I couldn't save myself...

I don't deserve to live...

I was too late...

You're dead,

They're dead...

I'm so sorry...

Please forgive me...

WHY DIDN'T YOU STAY WITH ME?!

 

No, I don't want this pain anymore...

But,

It won't let go...


Someone save me

My smile is dead...

© 2009 Poetic Solace


Author's Note

Poetic Solace
Italicized things are my thoughts.. (except the quotes)

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A very touching poem, I can truly feel your pain...
it is truly hard to help someone when you feel that you may
be the only one who can but not all is lost, pain is just temporary
it doesn't last forever even though at times it may seem like it does.
Don't lose hope one day your frown will turn up right again
just be patient.
Thanks for sharing

Best wishes


Posted 14 Years Ago



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Poetic Solace
Poetic Solace

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"Music = Poetry" I live in this one place called Minnesota... You've probably heard of it. You know, the one with the twin cities and stuff.. Yeahh... I realized that music is my escape from.. more..

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