Insanity

What's that, that I hear

Something not clear

as I run towards it

sounds from the rear

voices are strange

laughs are deranged

but that's what happens when

my mind flies away

Reviews

[Nikki]

I felt like I was in a dark tunnel.. Nay, a dark pipe (fits better).. Surrounded by nothingness-imagination breaks out of mind. Intriguing.

[Chris]

In reality i lose my mind often for short periods of time

[Nikki]

lol.. I knowww the feeling.

[Cindy Marietta]

Totally dig the last four lines. Nice poem!

[Chris]

Thank you so much i hope to get better over time