Mirage

Just words ~

To be inside someone’s heart
is like looking at the mirror
you can feel your presence
but actually
it’s just a reflection!

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of words and thoughts. Your words were magic. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Thankyou soo much dear.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Pragati.

[Xochipilli]

This is actually pretty neat, I like it and I can understand/relate to it sorta.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Ohh Thats great that you could relate X.....
Thankyou soo much dear!

[Xochipilli]

No problem.

[Najam Us Saher]

Witty remark about mirage and love. This shows the happiness one finds in love as you can feel the presence and also shows the sadness because it's just a reflection, it is difficult to express two equally opposite emotions in a single short poem you managed to do that very well.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Thankyou soo much Najam :)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome ☺

[ManasaC]

few words that have a profound sense of meaning. Good job!!!

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Thankyou so much Manasac :)

[Priyanshi]

This one was a deep...I found it so intense...Truly words are so wonderfully decorated.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Yes! Kinda deep....
Thankyou soo much :)

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure:)

[Shubham Sharma]

Your proses should be compiled into a book and published. Your every prose is superb but as i have been ranting about it for so long please please please write long poems. Btw you words are truly mesmerizing.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Yes! I m in the process of Publishing!
I had written Long ones too :D
Check them out from the very beginning!
:-P
Thankyou Shubham for the review!

[williamisles]

One of my favorites. (Proverbs 27:19)

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Thankyou Soooo much William :)

[Hebe]

Wonderful verse. Most of the time we spend our time seeing what we want to see.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Yes exactly Hebe
Glad you could relate to this

[Doodley]

A reflection of returned love. If that is truly the case.

Sometimes we stare in that mirror and see what appears to be a reflective love, but on closer inspection it is not a true reflection at all. Indeed it is a mirage.

A fine idea and metaphor. Nicely written.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Thankyou soooo much doodley :)
I m very glad you could relate to this piece :*

Love
Pragati

[Rahul]

One of my fav. poetry! Whiteness of soul, and the quiteness of thoughts have u well coated around the loaf of ur very caramelized feelings. Virtual depth of loving-ness is well "Miraged" off the chandelier of these "refractive" words, i say. Very touching... and eye-catching poetry u have come up with, Pragati.

Ps.
I guess, ur holy name "Pragati" suits ur little pretty-yet-quite creatively so "Lethal" persona very well. U really keep doing Pragati day-by-day, missy Pragati. xoxo

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Ohhhhh thankyou soooo very much Rahul
M elated that you loved the piece.......
Keep reviewing n reading :)