Dreamy world

Its about an imaginative world of small child , lost in his animated world.

  Riding my Lamborghini, I went

Chicago from Amsterdam.

Flying in the amidst of the cloud

landing on a huge , tall building.

I got up and walked

 from my car ,as a hero, wore glasses and

passing the hand over my hair.

                                                   All of a sudden

                                                  I saw some rogue

                                                 at my back and forth

                                                 encircling me.then

                                                 I chanter some verses and 

                                                 became a giant superhero.

 I laughed loudly and caught

one scoundrel with my two fingers,

laughing too badly.

Unexpectedly, the educator threw chalk 

on me and hit my head;

vanishing my dreamy world,

and opposing the real world.

Reviews

[Rahul]

Haha! You got me chuckle here, Priya!

Kinda like your vivid imagination. It's quite so, you know, beyond fun. It's good to make dreams esp. the ones that bring ecstasy to all of us, however, when they get shattered into pieces, it really hurts... like hell, and sometimes the pain of these broken-dreams, you can't bear. It happened to me once. Had a dream but when it got broken, i got broken deep inside. Anyways... you must be a storyteller. You write very good things to us readers. Keep up the good work.

I'd be looking forward to reading your work!

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so so much, Rahul. I'm really too glad that you liked it . thanks a lot for appreciation.

[Mamta Sonowal]

This poem is very nic... Btw every poem u wrote is amazing but this one is my favorite coz u wrote about dreamy world n loved such kind of poems... Well done... U r such an amazing writer...

[Priyanshi]

Hey , your review brought me a wide smile.....am too to know that you loved it, dear....you inspire me..Thank you so so so much, Mamta.

[Mamta Sonowal]

Ur welc'me Priyanshi... I'm happy tht my review brought a smile ur face...

[Zephyr]

I never saw the ending coming:)
Its a sweet work and so .real for children!
Keep writing dear:)

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so much, dear. You inspire me with your review, ...thanks once again.

[Zephyr]

My pleasure!

[alan peter kelly]

Scoundrels, indeed....made me smile. Thank you for that....I live my life as a figment of my own imagination... Your imagination shines here.

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so much , Alan. I'm glad that you liked it

[Raj Sahu]

The poem is sarcastic but imaginative. Good work indeed. Keep it up! I especially like these two parts:
“All of a sudden
I saw some rogue
at my back and forth
encircling me.then
I chanter some verses and
became a giant superhero.
I laughed loudly and caught
one scoundrel with my two fingers,
laughing too badly.
Unexpectedly, the educator threw chalk
on me and hit my head;
vanishing my dreamy world,
and opposing the real world.”

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so much Raj for your glad visit .

[Raj Sahu]

You're welcome dear poetess.