Just Like Else...

Just Like Else...

A Poem by Priyanshi

Just Like Else...



Just like other stars

one day you'll shine in me,

and the other day

you'll be the star of someone else sky.

Just like else,

you will enter me ,and leave me

if I don't stop you...

Just like else, you'll capture my heart,

and like none you'll return back,

stealing me forever.


© 2018 Priyanshi


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Just like (everyone) else I loved this poem. Beautiful

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Priyanshi

4 Years Ago

Hahaha...thnk u so much. :))
Desire to be with, and hope for love....
Fun play...
I liked it....:)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Priyanshi

5 Years Ago

hahaha...Even hope is also just like else....
Well, Thank you...thank you :))
I liked the way you compare person with a star and the way they brighten your life and leave. Very interesting.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Priyanshi

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the words:))
Najam Us Saher

5 Years Ago

You're welcome. ☺
Very well written, 'just like else' this really sound good

Posted 5 Years Ago


Priyanshi

5 Years Ago

Thank you Farhan so much
:))
Your mysterious words are so whimsical, I don't even think of a regular "beloved" as being the object of this narrator's words. Your words could be written to address another person in the human form, but I find myself thinking about God or the ghost of some beloved who's died. The love object of this poem seems to be "out there" in the universe, in a way that's not accessible to the human form, but always present for the invisible & uplifting connection. Love that idea (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Years Ago


Priyanshi

5 Years Ago

I wrote the poem remembering a human being who's alive Ma'am ....and i loved the way you perceive.. read more
This one is fantastic ..the heart of Galaxy star..you pushed the feelings up..

Posted 5 Years Ago


Priyanshi

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much Pooja for the lovely words and review:))
This one is fantastic ..the heart of Galaxy star..

Posted 5 Years Ago


stealing your heart,stars in the sky shining on you
lets say forever

Posted 6 Years Ago


Priyanshi

5 Years Ago

Loved the lines....
Thank you so much Sir for lovely review...:))
 wordman

5 Years Ago

my pleasure

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