Let's Leave

Let's Leave

A Poem by Priyanshi

      Let's Leave

 

    Leave me, or let me leave you

       Move on from me,

    Or let me move on from you

      For you know  well,

  Love stories when read satisfies better,

 But when played  sometimes sounds bitter.

    So switch off  the light of this bond

      And let's kill it before it kill us..

© 2018 Priyanshi


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It's been many decades since I was in such a situation, but you've described it perfectly. Two people just waiting for the other one to make the move. It's so hard. You know it's got to be done, but it keeps stretching on & on becuz neither person can say it as straightforward as this. People end up fighting about dumb things when the truth is, it should be over! I like the way you do a play on words (better/bitter), here & there (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Priyanshi

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much Ma'am for the honest review...
the situation is really hard as you said.read more



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Well written. I well understood your words but can't your feelings as i never faced any such situation.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Priyanshi

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the honest reivew...
:))
Amazing. meaningful, very well written. touching. Keep it it up

Posted 6 Years Ago


Priyanshi

6 Years Ago

Thank you friend so much for the lovely review:))
Very beautiful lines.....and most important thing in poetry is connection... actually I mean a poem should have the ability to get directly connected to the reader.... and this creation has that power....to get connected to the reader's heart....
And the last line is awesome....
Love it..
Keep Writing Priya...

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Priyanshi

6 Years Ago

o wow....a beautiful comment it is...thanks a lot Anshu.....
:))
Its just bitter truth wen get to know. U assembled words very finely that bitterness too accept about love!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Priyanshi

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear for the lovely comment
:))
It's been many decades since I was in such a situation, but you've described it perfectly. Two people just waiting for the other one to make the move. It's so hard. You know it's got to be done, but it keeps stretching on & on becuz neither person can say it as straightforward as this. People end up fighting about dumb things when the truth is, it should be over! I like the way you do a play on words (better/bitter), here & there (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Priyanshi

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much Ma'am for the honest review...
the situation is really hard as you said.read more
Mature decision taken.
I liked this poem, it was direct and straightforward.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Priyanshi

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear for lovely review:))
Najam Us Saher

6 Years Ago

You're welcome ☺
sometimes we just need to take a break,take a look

Posted 6 Years Ago


Priyanshi

6 Years Ago

Yeah Sir....
Thank you so much Sir for the kind words:))

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