Death's Lullaby

A song I wrote awhile ago.

Have you felt like the end is near?

Because it killed everyone you held dear

Have you felt like those loose ends could never be tied?

Just because they died

Listen to Death's Lullaby

aa he cradles you just before you die

Death's Lullaby

Goodnight, Goodnight

Sleep forever and die

Death's Lullaby

Goodnight, Goodnight

Kiss your breath goodbye

Let his darkness caress your spirit

you can cry but noone can hear it

while you're off in the underworld

the one place you can't explore

Hear Death's Lullaby

and drift into an endless sleep

Death's Lullaby 

Goodnight, Goodnight

Sleep forever and die

Death's Lullaby

Goodnight, Goodnight

Kiss your breath goodbye

Death's Lullaby

Goodnight

Sweet dreams

and die

Just a touch

and you're gone

Author's Note

Sorry for small amount of lyrics.

Reviews

[Juan de Rajah]

A bit overdone, the meaning was spread thinly on the 2nd, 4th and 5th stanza. It could do well with motion and some compression.

[Proxy]

Thank you!

[Peter H]

hmmmmmmm , i love the repetition but i do believe it was over done in this case . the idea is ingenious but it can use some work :)

[Proxy]

Thanks! (: