Why did you say I am beautiful

Why did you say I am beautiful?
This earth has but one graceful
Voice - sprinkling water, full of sweetness
Heart childlike full of tenderness

You said on my forehead does the sun rise
The sparkling stars twinkle in my eyes
Untied hair were the clouds floating
My words-honeyed, were ever enchanting

We were inseparable like scent and flowers
Into each other’s eyes we would gaze for hours
Life was sincere responsibility, still was fun
Come what may, from trouble we would not run

You said the faults were "often, majorly yours"
To harmonize the relation "efforts, of course ours"
Reasons superficial but galore you drifted
My silent words but no longer gifted

We, our being full of pain and longing
Still we couldn’t be each other’s belonging
The parting, an amicable solution be graceful

Still why did you say I am beautiful.

Reviews

[zainul]

One who really loved you has his own assessment.
Besides,as John Keats pointed out long ago:
"A thing of beauty is a joy for ever:
Its loveliness increases; it will never
Pass into nothingness; but still will keep
A bower quiet for us, and a sleep"
So enjoy the compliments,dear friend.
Enjoy the superb parting as you have passionately wrote down:
"The parting, an amicable solution be graceful"

[Prritiy]

Thankyou Zainul for lovely quote and being there always :)

[zainul]

This is all my pleasure,dear friend :)

[Prritiy]

:)

[zainul]

:)

[ron]

This is so beautiful. Tears fall from my eyes, I wish it were me that this poem was written for.

[Prritiy]

Thankyou so much for the kind review and i am sorry it brought tears.

[ron]

It brought tears of joy.

[Prritiy]

then its fine :) thanks :)

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Hi Prritiy, how are you, you are an amazing writer, I really admire you, the way you say things. Is a sad poem that raises many questions and feelings that perhaps most people have trough. It could be maybe that the message in the poem was that the other person was saying don't worry you are beautiful and you will find someone else.

[Prritiy]

Thankyou so much Anika for such a sweet review. Yes the feelings are generally the same, we all experience similar feelings of joys and pain.

[Spagbella]

Love this poem, really expresses the thinking behind it.

[Prritiy]

Thankyou so much for taking out time and reading this, i am glad your liked it.

[anxia]

Beautiful poem, loved the comparsions in it.

[Prritiy]

Thankyou for lovely words. Am glad you liked it.

[Luke L]

Lovely writing and lovely pictures as well ;)

[Prritiy]

Heartfelt thanks.

[DIVYA]

Very wonderfully written... You look lovely!

[Prritiy]

Thanks you so much Divya :)

[Inder24]

Loved the way the poem was flowing with the rythm!! One of the best poems that i have ever read !

[Prritiy]

Thank you so much Inder, am touched :)

[Inder24]

:)

[Prritiy]

:)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

I am touched by this one. Why did he said you are beautiful, and then at the end you parted your ways?

It's really difficult to forget someone you love whom from the start you considered yourself as part of him...as you two begun as inseparable ones.

Nice work. Keep it up and stay pretty, Prritiy. :)

[Prritiy]

Thankyou so much for your kind words n wishes. :)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

You're welcome, Prritiy. I like your pen name...sounds pretty. Lol :)

[Prritiy]

My parents named me 'Priti' I changed it to Prritiy :), thanks.

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Splendid read and write.

[Prritiy]

I thank you from deep down my heart Brandon.

[Jack...]

Wow, this is beautiful. You have captured a feeling that tears at the heart and brings questioned tears to the eyes. This was very well done and touched me deeply. The last line was huge and brought everything together nicely. Very good.

[Prritiy]

Am grateful Jack for such beautiful encouraging comment.