Kiss of Lightning

Give me your kiss of lightning
The rolling thunder cradles the ache
I feel stirring within me
Give me your kiss of lightning
A plateau to a world born anew
where someday, we shall start our new lives

Give me your kiss of lightning
and prove that life is beautiful
More than a fragile piece of truth
Give me your kiss of lightning
You electrify me with solemn grace
Just one kiss, one kiss, yeah

As the sun shines through the rain
I shall surely know true pain
Least till this stress fades away
I’ll think of you every day

Give me your kiss of lightning
A scarring strike that casts the night
into a white heat wonderland
Give me your kiss of lightning
A natural locomotive past the grey
into the yawning tunnel that leads to a new Heaven

Author's Note

Fifth poem in the 'White Gold' collection.

Reviews

[lissalovesyou]

Wow, this is so powerful. I feel like this should be a song or something. I love "Give me your kiss of lightning"
Kisses are usually associated with lightning ex: "your kiss electrified me" but the way you wrote it, it was fresh and not cliche.
I love your last stanza.
lissalovesyou:)

[EmilyBianca]

this is beautiful

[Luna Zerimar]

So good, so good.

I love, "Give me your kiss of lightning...and prove that life is beautiful...more than a fragile piece of truth...".

[L4rn13]

Nice, expressive within a peaceful atmosphere, yet energizing to read.

[melissa]

Amazing poem keep up the great work i can't wait to read more

[Bluefire]

Makes me think of a place like the Grand Canyon with very dark clouds overhead and odd lightening striking the earth. The sun shines through the clouds at some point, though.
Well done. ^^

[just Penny]

The repetition is effective and the sentiments nicely done. But your comment pre-title as an intro of "you electrify me with solemn grace" was what made me want to read the poem. I loved that line. Penny

[Honey-Bee]

Powerful poem love it! A plateau to a world born a new...love this line too! keep up the good work!

[Brook]

I really like the way this one flows, great job.

[Arabella Song]

Love the repetition and rhythm here! Excellent! :D