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A Poem by QC
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maybe a little bit pointless, but sometimes it needs to get out.

"
I'm not good with words. 

rethinking
unthinking,
my brain is a mass of musings, waiting to come out. 

they burst at the seams, these words,
sometimes tripping and falling all over each other.
stumbling and stuttering their way to consciousness;
uncontrollable. 

                              They

                            want to

                        be witty, they

                      want to be smart,

                  they want to make

                                  you bleed.                 


Just like yours did to me. 


but i'm pretty sure a hearty 

F**K YOU

would suffice. 


I think it's awful that,

after three years of friendship,

all i want to do is punch you in the nose, as hard as i can,

see if it bleeds. 


After all, actions speak louder than words, right? 

You would know that most of all.


but, contrary to  your belief, i won't do anything. 


not

one

thing. 


i'll let you have the last word, 

let you think you're something special. 


but a little word of advice: you're not. 

© 2011 QC


Author's Note

QC
You know who you are.

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I loved the start of this piece, and then it got personal, after the FU I got a bit dizzy. The way you spread words on a page, it really does work out very well.

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