Living Life

Living Life

A Poem by QuietPoet

Living Life

You tell me your

Still in love with me

I have no idea why

Your against everything I do

I’ve changed a lot in the last months

I’m doing things to help me escape

But its not bad things

I’m just having fun

You think I’m doing drugs

But really you don’t know me at all

I’ve promised myself that I never would

And the day I stepped foot where I work

Is the day I thanked God I made that promise

I’m going through this phase

Where I want to do everything

Jump off a cliff into water

Go indoor sky diving

Paintballing so I can get bruises

Speeding just to feel the fear

Ice blocking sounds dangerous

But I wanna do it

Doing theses things makes me alive

We only live life once

I’m young and free

So why not start living now

I’m not afraid to say I lost myself

I’ll find what I’m missing

I might not ever get it

But I’ll always be the good hearted person

So tell me why you love me

When I’m nothing you want

I’m sorry to say

But I don’t love you in that way..

© 2010 QuietPoet


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I love this one , there are the two voices in you , one trying to be the Good girl you are , and other that want to live , and its very natural your age... I do believe you know the limits and will not pass them , Yossi

Posted 14 Years Ago


Wow, this is very powerful. I love the overall message and your expression is very intriguing to the reader. Great write!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Such thoughts to be pondering on. I can feel the emotion you have put in this. This is expressed so well.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on January 6, 2010
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QuietPoet
QuietPoet

Las Vegas, NV



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Hello, my is kylie, I havent been on here for a long time, i haven't written in years so bare with me. Reading all my old stuff brings back a lot of memories. I have a husband and twin girls, i would.. more..

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