Jellyfish

Jellyfish

A Poem by QuietPoet

Jellyfish

Did you know

That jellyfish have no brain,

No heart, no eyes, no ears or bones

But they still move and are alive

I don’t know about you

But to me that is the most

Incredible thing I’ve ever heard

Did you also know that Jellyfish

Are the most deadliest thing in the world

How? When they don’t have a brain or heart

I don’t know, all I know is its so awesome

I sat there outside the tank for 20 minutes

Staring, watching them move

Up and down, as their muscles move underneath them

They had a pretty color to them, a light pink

I’m going to own one day

What I don’t get is

Such a beautiful fish

But so deadly..

© 2010 QuietPoet


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Very nice. Straight forward and to the point. Nice write =) And go Jellyfish!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Well, speaking as I creature of the deep myself (Cuttlefish) all I can say is don't mess with jellyfish! Nice one. I approve of marine theme poetry.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Ive been stung by a jelly fish and they hurt like a mother lol

Posted 14 Years Ago


PERFECT! Adding it to my favorites.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Amazing comparison of jellyfish being so beautiful yet so dangerous! Pure empathy goes out to your writings and good job!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Nice :) ... it make you think , if someone dont have a heart , or a brain he can not be broken , and live forever... but who want to be a thing with no feelings, I prefer my heart to feels and be broken than to be a Jellyfish :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


I didn't know all of these things.
This was very interesting.
I want a piranha.

-Elissa :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


The worst of the worst jelly fish is barely even visible, they are smaller than the thickness of your fingernail but Extremely poisonous... I watched a show on Discovery about some guy researching them and he was stung by one and was in the hospital for like two weeks. he said it was horrible and his whole body was in extreme pain.... So yeah jellyfish are pretty cool.

Posted 14 Years Ago


what is up with those jellyfish?

Posted 14 Years Ago



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