Disappear

Disappear

You broke my heart, once again

You’ve done it so many times
I have lost count

You disappear from me

I really don’t know why

One day you’re here with me

The next few months your not

Then you come back

Just to get my heart to race

Then tear it all apart by leaving

I think about how much I love you

And it really gets me down

Because we could of had something great

But then again, everything you’ve done

Makes me hate you so much

I’ve dealt with the hurt on my own

Living day by day with a broken heart

But hiding it away so no one will see

It’s the only thing I’m best at

I’ve kept myself busy

So I don’t break into pieces

If I didn’t, I would have

So I’m glad you’ve disappeared

Because the next time you come back

I will be stronger and tell you to go away

And to never speak or contact me again

It will be the best feeling in the world

But will I be able to, to the person I love?…

Reviews

[Sourav]

Very nice write.

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

This is so honest,unfeigned..transparent like a glass window..showing feelings just as they are..
i love it..entirely cause i can relate to it..
Why do we repeat the same old mistakes that can only bring us hurt..we might wince with pain each time..yet we let the person we love take the complete vantage of our vulnerabilities again and again..oh!i have been through this and i can feel you.

[Dutch Jr.]

Great work aof poetry here. The expression is like a work of art, and I can really feel the emotion through your words in this. Great write.

[A.Lee]

This is so well written. The emotion just flows right off the page. Out of pain and suffering comes some of the best work. Keep writing, let it be a filter for emotions like these. Nice write.

[The Flawed]

Well QP, sorry to read your pain, and there is a lot of it here.
All I can say is the best way to do what you want to is by turning a new leaf and giving someone else a chance.
Don’t think that this is the story of your life and it has to be like this forever.
His loss is another man’s gain (hopefully a good man)
But hay, what do I know?

[Antonio Valentino]

Follow your heart my friend, it will usually be your best guide. Hang in there, you deserve so much more than that kind of behavior.

Great write.
Antonio

[Tate Morgan]

Men were not very good as a whole to the ones we love beautiful poem

[R J Askew]

The best thing for a contented life is to avoid love at all costs. Take up a reliable passtime that you are the mistress or master of and immerse yourself in it. Love is a sugar high that more often than not ... disappoints. Love it over and done in about three seconds after which follows entanglement, children, divorce, chaos in millions of instances. It is illogical to submit yourself to this lotterly of many losers. And let's be frank is this species really worth continuing? No, an innocent but absorbing hobby beats love at every turn. Your friends will envy your detachment.

[MissWordSmith]

wow.. this was amazing. i loved the truth. the last line was heart breaking. honestly amazing piece here.

[HorrorMaster]

aww *hugs at this poem* I understand how you feel.