Nature

Describes what can happen when you just relax and enjoy nature.

 

Head out the window of my mother’s SUV

Looking at the trees and the sky as we fly down 94

Listening to Taylor Swift’s “Fifteen,”

Brings me back to where I am in my life.

High School.

There’s boys,

Sports,

Academics,

And my least favorite thing...

Drama!

But sitting in my mother’s SUV

Just focusing on nature

Lets me forget about

All my problems,

My worries,

And just lets me be...

ME!

 

Author's Note

Did it flow? What did you thnk?

Reviews

[Lotus]

Hmm..sorry but this one didn't flow for me. it may just be that we have different styles of writing and you seem to mostly write about subject matter that doesn't really appeal to me. I may just be being bias but we'll see.

[Rachael]

Its good, and I can tell that its probably something that you physically experienced, which sometimes isn't always good. Maybe you should try and put in imaginary events to counter balance the things that actually happened.
Other than that, good write, and keep writing!

[Poeticpiers]

as free style writing it is a fine effort but to obtain smooth floe poetry must be metered and for my preference rhyme
Without meter no matter how well written or how beautiful the subject material it still just prose