Defeat

My team had a chance to make to Nationals at a bowling tournament, but we fell eighty pins short.The next day new chance, but eight pins short.

Defend-
our house.
Potential-
a chance.
Failure-
stings like a bee.
Defeat-
like heartbreak.

Author's Note

Thanks for reading.

Reviews

[poetic-raven2012]

WYA! short, sweet style, punctuation is a FRIIIIIIIIIEND! but....losing no good. but poem is good.

dee end.

[Daniel Gardner]

Nice poem. Sorry for the defeat though. Gave you something to write about though.