Your Hand in Mine

A poem about Ryan's hand.

I look down
our hands intertwined;
I love the feeling
of your hand in mine.

Strong, yet soft,
your hand in mine,
I don’t want to leave you.
I don’t want to leave cloud nine.

Sadly I have to go.
I hold your hand tight.
We have to part
It’ll be alright.

One last embrace.
One last touch.
One last kiss.
This sucks so much.

I forever wish to hold your hand in mine.

Author's Note

What do you think? I strated off ryhming by accident, and I thought I should continue it, but don't usually rhyme.

Reviews

[Tahna]

Rhymings great, I love rhyming poems lol "This sucks so much." This is sweet and cool :) Awesome.

[deeps]

This is so wonderful and beuatiful.
I like this, very well written

[Beatles9322]

This is really beautiful. It is simple and to the point, which is how I write. There's no confusion at all what this poem is about. It's really great and I feel the same way. I want to hold my crush's hand so badly!!!!!!!