Dreaming

Dreaming

A Poem by Rac7hel

Ah, the energy, the remedy
the comedy
and since it is funny,
let's laugh a little
and since it's not funny
let's simmer in the sunlight and
be seriously sober
and get over and over
and trimmer around the edges
so there's no mistaking
the comedy, and the energy
to fill your lungs with the purest water
to swallow the sunshine
and the furious water
so that the clouds reflect the ocean
and the ground waves...
wave after wave under softening feet
a little like dying, or passionate sleep
beautiful as the truth when dreaming
pitiful, yet intriguing.

© 2009 Rac7hel


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Rac7hel
Rac7hel

New Orleans, LA



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I'm Rachel, more commonly known as Rac7hel around these here internets. I write pretty poetry and take pretty pictures... I try my damnedest to play pretty music. I do other stuff but I'll save that f.. more..

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