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InterNOT

InterNOT

A Poem by Rachel
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Just a poem about the power of technology

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The leaves could change but nobody would know
Their eyes remain fixated on that movie or show
No one takes the time to shake each other's hand
A friend request is the same, don't you understand?

We are trapped in a world that is all so virtual
Unaware as time becomes full circle
Is love at first sight the same on the screen?
Can you fall in love with a person with a computer in between?

We thrive with the idea of popularity
And that is defined by Instagram likes or Twitter followers apparently
We invest so much time and passion and devotion
To a world where the thing to lack is emotion

We are all victims under the rule of technology
Yet live in a place defined by democracy
No need to speak when we can just type
When the answers to all questions are there with a swipe

Children no longer know how to play
It isn't on an App, but now that's the way
Endless hours are not spent at the park
But in a room with a TV or computer in the dark

We try to fit in by being the same
How much longer until we have the same name?
The phones will get smarter and we will get dumber
But we are more than an icon and phone number

It's not too late to fix what has been done
The battle's not over, technology has not won
Just put down your phone and walk away
And when you see someone, don't type, but say "hey"

© 2015 Rachel


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This is so true!! I really believe that people should get back to simplicity and enjoy the beauty that each other gives and enjoy the beauty of nature. Technology is a very deceptive thing, that takes complete control and we miss the most important things of life, until we realize at the end of life, all that we strove for, all the material possessions that we obtained means nothing. Its the love of others in our lives that count. For that is all we will have when we exit this life. Awesome right, thanks for sharing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Like, like, like, like, like, like. We ARE becoming robots for all the reasons you mention here. Great writing here everyone should read.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is awesome my exact sentiments,today you go into a restruant and see a family of 4 texting each other rather than talking.Very well said and presented

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Added on January 11, 2015
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Tags: poem, answer, question, people, life, happiness, technology


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