Tin Man

i want, i need

i wish, i plead

i cry, i hurt

i break, i leak

but you don't care

you my Tin Man

cold, and heartless

Reviews

[Criss ;)]

It could be a nice sing...on TIN man...lol...well tin man'd b happy to see your this piece that some one's carein' for him..hahahahah
anyway....nice write, this's really very amazin'...i'm still screamin' this song in my mind...
well penned...

Have this 95.9/100
Have a nice writin' :)

[Raya Avans]

thank you all.. :) means a lot.

[HeIsWe]

This is amazing!!!

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This one is amazing!

I love the flow of this short but beautiful piece of art of you :) thanks for sharing....

[r]

oooh, i love this. it's so powerful despite how short it is. lovelovelove it. :3 it's like so pretty and strong. i love the feeling and emotions in it.

[Maria M.]

This is truly wonderful! The way you are able to create such an enormous "feeling" in so few words is amazing

[Dove]

woahh i really do like this. I enjoyed reading it even if it was short. You did a great job on this poem.