Oh, my heart goes on a' beating

Every moment away from thee my luv
Is like a moment spent in vain
And though I hold you in my heart
My soul, ‘tis in awful pain

For I ache to feel you in my embrace
Oh, I yearn to feel your touch
Still my heart goes on a’ beating
Though it aches for thee so much

Every heartbeat and pause my luv
It aches for thee, my dear
But my heart goes on a’ beating
And sheds not a single tear

For ‘tis not o’ long a wait my luv
Till ‘a see your shining face
And soon enough our time shall come
When I melt in your embrace

So my heart goes on a’ beating
Awaiting and beating for thee
Oh, my heart goes on a’ beating
For with you it aches to be

Reviews

[[KL]]

I'm liking this, it's a very good piece. If this was written for someone, they're very lucky indeed..
Just wondering though, are you really dyslexic? You don't seem to be after reading this, just saying.
One tiny last little thing.. Line 4.. I'm not sure if you'll agree with what I'm saying, or if it's just my opinion.. But maybe it'd flow better to as "My soul, ‘tis in great pain"? Nevertheless, it is very good indeed (: Thanks very much for sharing.