Bloodlust

No, this is not about Twilight.

Bloodlust,
the craving.
Drink till then night is raw
and when there's no blood left to drink...
eat yourself alive.

Author's Note

no twilight.

Reviews

[Jason]

Demented and beautiful. I love it! Thank you for sharing.

Jay

[Legion]

Sounds like a stark raving mad lunatic of a vampire. But its starkness and desperation in depravity is genuine and well written for such a short and prolific piece. Well done.

[RainbowFlames]

lol poetry is not something you have to "get" and i clearly stated "no twilight" because it's not about twilight, isn't related to twilight in anyway and i wrote this years before twilight even came out.

[Papercuts.Hate.You.Too]

i dont get it either
but it makes you think
and are you a twilight hater
im a twilight freak
leylia

[Rainbow Rider]

Ah weird! That's all I have, Weird! Short and sweet, but weird. Okay, I'll say it again. Weird! I actually like this for it's weirdness! But did you mean to say Then and not The in the second line?

[Brandy]

I totally didn't get it, really, it sounds more like a crappy quote you made up more than a poem. I do liek the way you put "Till the night is raw" That is really original as far as I can tell, and if it's not thats terible. Lol.