Sad...

Just something bout my bf

Its sad you say you love me so

But I see the way you had her

She was everthing to you

So do I mean nothing?

She was your happiness and your joy

She was your everything

You did things for her you would never do for me

Its sad I have to point this out

Its sad I have to say

That you don't love me in that way

I love you with all my heart

Maybe I'm just not enough

Maybe you still love her

Or maybe I'm not a very good replacement girl!

Reviews

[Wunderlich]

This is very emotional. Well written and good. Nice job.

[Nicole]

It was very emotional, but VERY good.

[Renia Cipriani]

Aww, sad poem. But really pretty. You have a mistake in your line "She was you happiness and your joy", I believe.
Isn't it suppose to be "She was your happiness and your joy?" You put you, instead of your. Your sounds and flows better. Hope that helps, it was probably just a typo. Keep up the great work, this is a beautiful piece.

[Babbette Francis]

I'm gonna have to go with the other reviewers and say yes...this is a very sorrowful piece. I felt every word of it. You're amazing!!

[Neeeks!]

This is a sad poem. I love the emotion you put into this piece. But there are a couple spelling mistakes. Other than that, I love it. =]

[unspokenguilt]

That is sad, it's filled with great emotion anda sense of longing...apparently he can't love you like he should. I sure it's a common feeling and many can relate...Great write!

:) ear