Your World and Mine

Your World and Mine

A Poem by RaindropsRoses93

I say what I feel and I hear what I want.
My rational way of thinking has become something to flaunt.
My life is controlled by another person’s mind.
I am taking on a mask of a different kind.
A once simple world full of anger and war.
A world filled with hatred be have begun to deplore.
Your world and mine have been intertwined from the start.
But if we don’t change it will tear us apart.

© 2008 RaindropsRoses93


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Another good poem. I like it. I can feel the emotion in this one.

Posted 15 Years Ago


This song really is touching. It's short, sweet, and down to the point great job Heather! I love it!

Posted 15 Years Ago


This is really good! You are better at writing poems than I am

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on June 14, 2008

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RaindropsRoses93
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poughkeepsie, NY



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