A Poem by Raja

To long memories, gone!



Layers of time,

With you being stunned

In hypnotic shrill,

The first Encounter and your fantasy in me…


Literature exposed in open parentheses,

No colons, no inversions,

A figurative luster

With unspoken desire in silent rhythm


While you too unveiled your senses…


To reminisce that afterwards �"

Gateway of touches, glistening to

Shape up imperfection in something unbuttoned,

Something that creates cheers!


Where are you?

What made you take so long to stand unobserved on the other side and think of us?


We were two to create one in one single pause

You shined; you inclined, if I’m not mistaken,

You doing your jig all along


Are you scared standing in front?

Didn’t we see each other like this before…’bare’?

Pointing out on your body you said,

“You remember, you mentioned once the portion in me should be chiseled out?”

‘Yes, I remember!’

“It’s gone,

I’m now the slender

I’m new to sleep

I’m the desire, manifold in someone’s gestures,

I’m the action beheld…

Remember, I’ve become the one you always mentioned…”


‘I do

I do, but for someone…not for me!

My ever sought desire

I do! Not for us…’

© 2011 Raja

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So stunning... so richly woven in the fabric of remembrances... there is so much emotion and memory flooding your words... your thoughts... beautifully bittersweet in the breathing, my friend... an enchantment...

Posted 10 Years Ago

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This is quite refine work .... loved the way you introduced the topic and how in second stanza you use stress release stress pattern......
the impact is very clear the way you put forward questions in between the lines .....
and conclusion has been quite strong the way you stressed I do ! not for us .....

Lovely write up ...keep writing and giving us readers such delightful beautiful piece of works !!

thanks for share !


Posted 10 Years Ago


10 Years Ago

when a person writes, he writes to soothe him first as I take it that way and that it is his thought.. read more
Remarkable writing love! This holds so much emotion throughout, a wonderful piece to delve into and find myriad thoughts and visions xoxo

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on November 23, 2011
Last Updated on November 29, 2011



Kolkata, India

Writing is my passion. I write stories, poems and scripts in English and in Bengali. I love to portray the optimistic part of human life with a contrast to the real world. Writing is the most powerfu.. more..

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