Faded dream

The picture inspired this...

It was a gentle grasp

A firm clasp

A warm holding

Faith unfolding

Made her feel steady

And yet so heady

Was another world

Her spirit unfurled

Was like an embrace

With divine grace

The vision faded

Reality invaded

 

 

Reviews

[Brenda Sue]

A very beautifully written poem. Wonderfully penned. Great job.

[Bubo]

Beautifully written.........to get lost for a minute like that.

A warm holding

Faith unfolding

Made her feel steady

It's a shame reality returns!!

[Phil Sanders]

Just read this again .. delightful ....

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Beautiful piece, very uplifting. I found the sad ending a little dissapointing, yet it seemed right...not sure why...
I pilfered your picture! Sorry LOL xxx
Helen xxx

[Simmering embers]

I am here at last my dear sister. I have read every bit of yourself that you have poured out here. Bravo!

[Marvin Lewis Jr.]

I love the flow of your poem!!!

[Wolfwind Words]

You have done a superb job and making a picture and telling us what it speaks to you!
Great job!

[Rodwonder]

The rythm is like a song... I love to know where people get there inspiration. Very cool...

[Barbara Walker]

A beautiful poem! "was like an embrace, with divine grace" love that part. Then, reality. Sometimes you feel that close, but, for me, it's too short lived! A great read, beautiful imagery. Barbara

[E. M. Murren]

It is lovely. Reality invades far too often, I fear. You have such a graceful pen.