Illusory Mirage

A song inspired this.. its just a little whimsicality

Were you just a mirage

Or a distant star

Light years away

Or simply an illusion

Did you exist

Or were you

A figment of my imagination

Reviews

[None]

I really like the concept of the "mirage" and how you used it here. Your poem says so much in few precious words. The photos enhance your words and leave one wondering the answer to your questions. Your poem is beautifully written.
I'm listing the words of yours that stand out and go so well together here: "mirage, distant star, light years away, illusion, exist, figment of my imagination." Your writing is simply brilliant!

[An Ordinary Woman]

How gorgeous and inspiring. The pictures set off the perfect images to go with these delightful words.

Very, very nice my friend.

[Imperfection]

When the dream/nightmare is broken, all that is left are these questions.
Few short lines, well put together.
Powerful write.

[Natalie C]

Hey this was amazing! Short but sure does pack a punch.

My friend you have done it once again, staying true to yourself - you have graced us with yet another thought provoking piece just the way you would know how.

Beautiful and the pics were great too

Like in all your poems, the words, form, and visualization are very well done.

The poem was well lit by the two pictures put together. It emphasized the message. Consequently, they give more meanings to the two pictures.

A very good piece.

[Carole]

Awe!!!! I love the picture of the angel. Who could EVER say there is NO God?! This is absolutely beautiful, my friend. :-) Very nice.

[Phil Sanders]

Thoughtful .......