Karma

Slowly but Surely

Confetti bubbles in a heart
While bullets surf a brain
Unspoken deeds rewritten
To hide an act of shame

To Strive and Thrive 
Within a page of life and love and honor
When trust is sold as promised land
To devil... from its Mother.

When one can see beyond the stench
Of death in loves design, 
A dying wish...from graveyard shift
Will capture greedy minds! 

So Shhhh dont tell...
of broken spell
When book of life is driven
A bodies work in all its acts
Is wealth in time of vision

Calmly waiting for the day
Of fate in wheels and mission 

Reviews

[shadrach hah]

Hi Rapture, you give Karma a true voice. You skillfully create another poetic gem in your powerful write. Your descriptive words sing such strong visions into the mind. Another wonderful piece of poetic grace. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs always....Mike.

[¿]

Was wishing since days to read about Karma in a poetic way....well I thank you for writing this!
Like, each words you've put is just greatly blended with truth in the whole poem...
The second stanza is what I loved the most.... and the description, more than that!
Slowly but surely you'll face your Karma....each deeds shall be done wise!
Thanks for sharing this great....and congratulations for being featured in Launch Pad Volume I !!
:)

[Rapturecapture]

Hi Tahsin, thank you so much for your wonderful review of my poem very much appreciated!!

[¿]

You're heartedly welcome dear :)💜

[Chris Shaw]

Karma, oh yes indeed, seen it in action.....Your poem is beautifully crafted and a delight to read. Thank you.

Chris

[Rapturecapture]

Hi Chris
Thank you for reading and your lovely review much appreciated!
Rapture

[Chris Shaw]

You are most welcome