Sex Cry

A giving smack! 

of

Anticipation

Exhilaration

Jubilation

Liberation

And Ohhhh the relief.

Reviews

[Onlyme]

I must admit, this poem made me chuckle. and Think of s&m and kinky people. Then I read your comment. And blushed. As then I realized what you meant, a baby being born, to smack on back to clear their lungs and for them to cry, from that anticipation it will working, to the jubilation of it doing so. To then the liberation and all the feelings of relief it's over. And they are fine and alive.

[Brad Dehler]

Wow. Yes, this has some punch. Or smack? Very intriguing

[Lisasview]

First read of yours and I di find it rather interesting..
Sounds like a night of absolute perfects sex!!
I have written quite a few sensuous poems.. perhaps you might find time to read and review.
Lisa, now in Spain

[Relic]

................................Giving birth, yes. I remember going through this when I was born. haha

[Haley]

Such a simple and straight forward poem that leaves little to no questions. It's hard to have something this short have such a clear meaning, but boy does it. I really like this!

[shadrach hah]

Hi Rapture, this is such a wonderful write, a moment of great joy for any mother, to hear that smack and then hear that cry. The baby is born and it sings its first notes. The most wonderful moment of all, childbirth. Hugs.

[Rapturecapture]

Thank you shadrach hah

[shadrach hah]

You are welcome, Rapture. Have a wonderful evening. Hugs....Mike.

[augustus]

Short and sweet. That's how I like poetry. By the way! There is no such thing as 'kinky people'. We are all different. Some more than others!

[wordman]

relief and a mothers love brought on a big sigh of relief

[Franky]

no doubt! I like how you wrote this too. Not boring!

[Rapturecapture]

Hi John thank you for reading the meaning behind my poem is Birth from a mother's point of view.