Rainy Pleasure

To get wet with no fear

The pleasant smells of mud,

The gusts of wind,

The songs of heart,

The kisses of droplets.

Tears get mixed,

Love showered,

All forgotten,

My heart stolen.

Oh! Listen! All the rain lovers,

Open your arms,

Hug the rains,

Give into the rainy pleasures....

Author's Note

Please review the poem. Appreciations and Criticisms is welcome. Thanks for Reading! Hope you liked it!

Reviews

[Bear]

Critique first, the wind gusts not gushes :~)
So this is a name sake poem is it, a testament to your passion for precipitation. I to enjoy a good rainstorm but you left out the part that I like best and that is the sound of thunder. Here in the open plains where the land is flat, a roll of thunder can last for over 30 seconds and in many different tones and pitches. See you got me involved it your poem and that is what a good author does, it also speaks of the quality of your work. I also see that this is a topic that can be written about again and again and not lose your intensity or passion for, well done my poetic friend.

[Rainslover]

I'll change that! Thanks for notifying it! Thunder- The Roars! I missed it out! Thank You! Yup, it can be written again and I will write a more good one next time!

[DBKaine]

Couldn't agree more with you Bear.
DBKaine

[Matt Hope]

I really like this one being a rain lover myself.

[Rainslover]

Thank you dear!

[DBKaine]

I like it. It might have come across as a little short, as the emotions it brings out comes to a halt at the end very abruptly. I wasn't too sure what emotion or situation this poem was trying to express. Maybe pop a little more thought into the emotions your trying to express and find a way to reveal those emotions in a more fluent way.
D

[Rainslover]

Thanks! Yes, it should have been long, but I don't know something made me cut here! The poem had a bit weaker ending! I myself am not satisfied of this one!
Thanks again! :)

[Mr Good]

all random thoughts, thoughts are good for poem.
but honestly i would categorize it as out of poetry format, n style..which is your style? if amateur n just random is called poetry, then this is one good thing.
no offense, just read lots of poems first n then try to relate ideas, in your poem ideas are related but not not linked well in a poetic sense.
otherwise ideas are good

[Rainslover]

Thank you! And no thanks, for showing me my problems. I'm an amateur and I'm still trying to develop and become a professional! It's been a few months I have taken up poetry, otherwise I used to write stories. I will try my best next time to get it all in a poetic sense! Thank You!

[Rainslover]

it isn't no thanks there! It is thanks for showing me my problems! Put it by mistake and checked now.

[Emily]

I love these short poems!
Lovely wording!
Well one!

[Rainslover]

Thank You! Glad you liked it!

[S.R.M.]

short and sweet, made me smell rain :)

[Rainslover]

Thank You!

[vspjaguar]

Enjoyed reading this, thanks for sharing. I am a rain lover too :D

[Rainslover]

Glad that you enjoyed. Who can deny the love of rain?lol.