Interlova

Do you remember e-flowers

you were giving me every day?

Your e-triviality, wrote as a poem

Love scheme,

which we wanted to modernize.

Do you remember e-feelings

caught by wind of keyboard strikes?

Face to face

Only

touching glass by kiss.

 

Petrarch didn't know,

what is Interlova.

He truly felt

and didn't need

to be online.

 

Dan... I walk away,

but please don't forget I will love you,

utill we lose our internet

connection.

Reviews

[Roshan Nair]

A weirdly modern piece in a weirdly connected world.. I liked how you use these new concepts in a poem, quite unique and refreshing than metaphors about ever-present phenomenons. cheers

[RattyAdalan]

Thank you so much. I am glad that you like my poem. I am gratefull for you opinion. Hugs! :)

[Rousbeh Zibaie]

It really strikes a key because I do the same thing, I give e-flowers to girls to make them happy about themselves. True to be!

[RattyAdalan]

Thank you for a comment! Flowers are great gift, even e-flowers. :D