Cyber Stalker

Midnight’s dismal smoke interlaced about me

Discarded and somnolent I linger along a beaten path

As I listen to a spiteful connoisseur

Whose annotations are a haunted whine

And enthralling my reservations like a felony

She materializes to embezzle my song

In her haughtiness she advocates how I am erroneous

Mistaken about what though?  I dare query

My question’s retort was an arduous chore

For words stuck in her throat like rotted meat

And I realized compassion was her enigma

As her individual was a contaminated filament

While she stalks in world of cyber

Author's Note

Have mercy with this. I wrote it when I was very tired and worn out physically, mentally and emotionally. UPDATE: I have edited it a little bit, but realize it needs more work. Thanks to everyone who has read and commented! I also made it not rhyme so much. XD

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Maybe your emotions were too raw, maybe you needed to exorcise them. There's more than meets the eye in this, the power of it, the thoughts in it are extreme. No need to alter, not really but, in time, if you want, you can calm it. Take care of precious you

[Raven Starhawk]

You are absolutely correct. My exhaustion was preventing me from writing. Thanks for the review! I have edited this now so hopefully it reads better.

[emmajoy]

You've calmed; now made your point, expressed deep and hurt feelings, yet, love, you've taken control of them. Brava, you. We all need a hug occasionally!