A Killing Mind

Devil's daughter bent over a bleeding rose...
...searching for father's hand in netherworld's ritual...
...as venom swims a green river...
...and finds a animal room in a killing mind

Reviews

[Rob Santana]

The first line grabbed me and put me into a trance, I envisioned this beautiful demon goddess bent over a rose while it bleeds it's own color red which is it's blood. Does that make any sense to you? It's what I saw. Raven, you are a unique one of a kind writer of dark poetry. I hope you are not offended by that.

[Annabelle Lee]

different, yet captivating.

[Writer *78*]

seriously where do you come up with this stuff its amazing. you put me into a dream as if everything i saw was real and then at very end you caused me to awaken as if the world is 'normal' again. impressive work.

Writer 78

[Chris]

amazing

[Chris]

I love it

[InsanityWriter]

Very descriptive. :) Excellent imagery. (: Great job!

[emmajoy]

Dear goodness, you've struck a chord with this, yet not, not a write i'd normally read! You create such pictures in the mind, a series of dark paintings - not ones i'd hang on my wall.. but how powerful they are!