I'm Here You're There

A poem about B

My memories are slowly fading away

I try to hold on.

To you and to them.

Today I thought I saw you. 

I froze.

I stared, 

I soon realized it wasn't you.

I know it's only been four months.

But I'm still counting.

It isn't as hard. 

As it was before.

I still think about you. 

I don't wonder what you're doing.

Or if your thinking of me.

I think about how things use to be.

I relive memories everyday.

I think about what life could be like when you finally come home.

You're over there.

Working hard. 

I miss you dearly.

While I'm here at home

Trying to keep busy.

The days are easier. 

But when I come home it's alittle harder.

But I know soon the wait will be over.

Soon I'll see your face.

Soon I'll hear your voice.

Soon I'll be home.

Because your arms are my home. 

And right now I am homesick

Author's Note

This is a poem about B, he's a guy a like.

Reviews

[Leigh]

Yes good ending and nice rhythm all the way through a very enjoyable read

[Aly]

thank you

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"because your arms are my home/ and right now i am homesick"

oh that is beautiful.

jacob

[Aly]

thank you

[InsanityWriter]

A little sad, but very sweet. ^_^ Last two lines were my favorites!! :) Great job.

[Aly]

thank you :)

[Mir]

I absoltley loved this!
I can relate to this with two different people. Which is probably bad. But ones past and ones present (hopefully future..lol)
Hope things will work better for you and him than they're working for me and the guy I like. :) Mines on a fast trip to Nowhere, sadly.

[Aly]

I can relate to the no where part miranda.
Aw glad you like it.

[Ayvid N]

Oh...you are putting me in a very sentimental mood....now I'm missing him too! Cant wait to get back home from office!

[Aly]

Lol. Thank you. Always glad my writing can help you relate.

Aly

[Antonio Valentino]

the last two lines were a great finish.. im sure he misses you too.. i hope he got to read this, im sure he would have appreciated it, it couldnt have been a better piece of the fondness you share

very nice job

Antonio

[Aly]

Thank you, I think he does miss me as well. He doesn't know about this website and won't really see this poem, until I show him which will be sometime next year. Maybe in the Summer. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

Aly

[Antonio Valentino]

oh gosh such a long time to wait.. that is too bad, emotions like these should be shared.. im sure the reunion will be very special

you're very welcome, it was my pleasure

[Aly]

Yup. Started waiting last year in September. thank you.

[Antonio Valentino]

patience really is a virtue isnt it..

[Aly]

yes. hopefully me and him work out though. but I'm just grateful we're really good friends. Makes things easier.

[Antonio Valentino]

ahhh.. well in my opinion if you're not great friends in the first place then why even take it to the next level.. yes, patience again.. and even if it never happens, you still have that great friend..

[Aly]

yes. Thanks.

[jennilouhoo]

Very sweet and heart felt. Nice job!

[Aly]

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. Much appericated.

Aly

[jennilouhoo]

Any time!

[marie]

great write loved the story it tells:)

[Aly]

thank you

[marie]

:) no problem:)

[Michael Stevens]

I could feel the heartache clear over here; excellent poem!

[Aly]

thank you

[s y e]

Awwwww. This was sweet!

[Aly]

thank you