wish upon a star

wish upon a star

A Poem by Raven666
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it's my first poem please comment

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how I wish upon a star

how it seems so far away

oh, how I wish upon a star

look as it sparkles in the night sky

as the moon watches over us

as the stars are out to play

oh, how I hope my wish comes true

as I lay in my bed

as I wish to touch the star that I wished upon

so that I too can play in the night sky

oh, how I wish

how I wish upon a star

© 2009 Raven666


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Very nice effort

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Raven666
Raven666

Viroqua, WI



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My name is Jena. I have an older brother and five pets named Coco(my rabbit), Shadow and Raven(my two cats), U-Neek and Lena(my two dogs). I love sotfball and soccer. My parents are happily married.. more..

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