I'll Be Here

I’ll be here
If you want me
As the sun burns out
In front of your eyes
I’ll be here
If you need me
When the tears won’t stop
I’ll be here
Until the moon turns to dust
You’ll see me here
When you think no one is
When you need one
who won’t come
I’ll be right here
I’ll be here, happy
When I see you smile
I’ll be here
if you need me
When you don’t
And I’m not needed
I’ll go in peace.

Author's Note

I'll ONly get better if your review and critique.

Reviews

[Marcello]

I'm not good at critiquing..im no expert...but it sounds like it could easily be made into a song :)

[Mae Morales]

I love this poem, I feel the same way, I'm always there for that somone and if I know that they don't really need me I'll go in peace.

[c.m.]

Well I love the message here. The lines seem a bit short, but yet they fit the piece well. I don't know, the poem was lovely. The message beautiful, and I think wecan all relate at some point.