My new THANG

My new THANG

A Poem by Raymond Federle

my new thang

sweet sweet girl

loves the sound

when I rock her world




© 2014 Raymond Federle


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Raymond Federle

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There's nothing like the sound of a tractor to make a woman's heart beat faster.

That guitar is just about big enough, isn't it?

Posted 9 Years Ago


Raymond Federle

9 Years Ago

LOL Yeah Marie it is...now in all honesty we TRIED to find a smaller guitar...but sometimes, ya know.. read more
Sweet and simple generally gets the girl...
Nice little write.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very very nice. I Love it.
Excellent job!!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raymond Federle

9 Years Ago

Thank ya dear!- ZERO
Tina Kline

9 Years Ago

You're very welcome.

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Added on August 23, 2014
Last Updated on November 3, 2014

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Raymond Federle
Raymond Federle

Cumberland, MD



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I've always been a jack of all trades. I've been a poet, author, social commentator, comedian, online gamer, pod cast host, and Youtuber. I've had a class A license to drive semi truck over the road. .. more..

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