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Compartment 114
Compartment 114
Answer Me!!!

Answer Me!!!

A Poem by R.Inc$
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When is a prayer loud enough to be heard?

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I just wanna shout from my rooftop because I don't think God can hear me form where I am.

These whispers just don't reach beyond the stars. 

So I'll scream and scream and scream till my voice gives out.

Then my body language shall roar. 

Crashing through the clouds and piercing the Heavens, rustling every angels' wings.

Can you hear me now, or shall I become the beast you mistakenly made and rip the world asunder?

Answer me, or else my question will quest only for the destruction of what took 7 days to make.

© 2011 R.Inc$


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typo, form should be from. sorry to point that out.

do you really think god is that deaf? he might be?

thought provoking. nice writing

Posted 13 Years Ago


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