Tears

Each tear that falls is uniquely one

All tears are not equal,
each bears a falling weight
despair or life's gait-
Plunging as an anchor's last descent
into a sea,
spent.

Reviews

[Constance Payne]

there is so much being said in o few words.

wonderful read

[Delaney]

This is a very simple, yet powerful poem. It almost can be translated into people. For however similar two people may be, they will never be close to the same, because their lives are two separate paths and the weight they bare cannot compare. Very nicely written.

Yours truly, Delaney

[InsanityWriter]

Beautifully put... Lovely poem. :)

[TL Boehm]

wonderfully penned. I agree - all tears are not equal....

[Zahra]

That really had me into pondering. All tears may seem alike but the reason behind them are not same. Each of them has a different story behind it. Really liked your write. Keep it up.

[Melissa]

Thank you for this lovely review.

[Baby Ricochet]

That's really good. Excellent work.

[Melissa]

Thank you for reading this and commenting

[Acucena G.]

before reading I knew it would be something amazing, but wow once again it was beyond my imagination, perfect flow, perfect topic , its small but huge at the same time. I love it

[Melissa]

Thank you so much for reading this and for leaving a comment. I so appreciate it.

[Acucena G.]

You are welcome

[Holly Mason]

every tear as every person that sheds them-are uniquely different and should be handled as such
written with beauty
spent tears leave us broke or possibly broken but they leave us non the less
thank you so for sharing lovely

[Melissa]

I love the comment of handling each tear differently, that's poetic...Thank you for reviewing this.

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

This is absolutely sublime. The lines flow beautifully together, and the imagery is magnificent. This is one for the library!

[Melissa]

Thank you. I've been away from Writerscafe for some time now. It's like starting all over. I appreciate your words and your time.

[icelandicblue]

This is beautiful. There are tears for all occasions. I like the idea of them falling into the sea.