Flutterby Touch Haiku

Flutterby Touch Haiku

A Poem by Frieda P

Lovely butterfly

flutters the very heartstrings

magic in your touch



© 2013 Frieda P


Author's Note

Frieda P
For Lee, you eternally bliss my heart ♥♥

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Hi Frieda. A lovely write and skillfully crafted traditional haiku. Perfect 5/7/5 syllabic form. Heartfelt. Good imagery, flow and tone. Lovely depth of feeling; a beautiful way to express the magic of love by the soft fluttering of a butterfly. Good word choice. Well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Always jazzed by your in depth is reviewing Shelley, thanks so much!
ShelleyA

11 Years Ago

You're very welcome Frieda. Always a pleasure to read your poetry. Have a great day!



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Beautiful Haiku Frieda. Well crafted.



Posted 10 Years Ago


very lovely haiku...... good job

Posted 10 Years Ago


absolutely right.. nice lines...

Posted 11 Years Ago


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So beautiful, what a nice tribute. Very touching. Loss is so hard to bare, I hope that writing helps and I wish you all the best. Cai :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is tender and beautiful, like your sister. Love, David

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Lovely sentiment, thanks so much for your kind words David.
flutterby, clever anagram :) amazing haiku

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much :-)
Beautiful description create a nice vision. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thank you Coyote.
Hmm... This one is good I loved it and yes that was magic in that last line though :P
Loved it ;)
- Singh :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much Singh, glad you enjoyed it. :-)
Vikrantsingh

11 Years Ago

Yea I did :)
She shall always touch your heart, even in silence...
When you feel that little bliss, (that adrenaline) of doing
Something truly happy, it was her for sure, wanting you
to enjoy, every bit of the other side... touching one love...
tears....

- Elisa

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Now you've given me goosebumps my sweet friend, we live for those moments in time and thank you dear.. read more

11 Years Ago

No thanks love, those moments, are to treasure... I'm happy I could bring you a smile, and love you .. read more
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

♥♥♥..........................
Fabutastic, Luv.
You have a marvelous way of seeing things.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I see my sister Lee in every butterfly, that's why I inserted her photo here, she loved flutterbys.... read more
Angel

11 Years Ago

That is so beautiful, Frieda.
And you are much more than welcome, my sweet friend.

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Added on August 5, 2013
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Tags: butterfly, haiku, love, touch

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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