Flutterby Touch Haiku

Lovely butterfly

flutters the very heartstrings

magic in your touch

Author's Note

For Lee, you eternally bliss my heart ♥♥

Reviews

[ShelleyA]

Hi Frieda. A lovely write and skillfully crafted traditional haiku. Perfect 5/7/5 syllabic form. Heartfelt. Good imagery, flow and tone. Lovely depth of feeling; a beautiful way to express the magic of love by the soft fluttering of a butterfly. Good word choice. Well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on!

[Frieda P]

Always jazzed by your in depth is reviewing Shelley, thanks so much!

[ShelleyA]

You're very welcome Frieda. Always a pleasure to read your poetry. Have a great day!

[Ravyne Hawke]

This is a gorgeous poem, Frieda.. your haiku always is. I love the fluttering of heartstrings.. awesome!

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Lori, jazzed you enjoyed this one!

[Baby Ricochet]

Good Haiku............................

[Frieda P]

Thanks Baby.

[Emerald Seas]

I love butterflies. Wondrous creatures that show us the power of transformation and beauty in simple things. Beautiful haiku, my friend!

[Frieda P]

So true my friend, thanks, glad you enjoyed this one Sera.

[poetdoug]

Butterflies are a wonderful centerpiece for your Haiku. You are so right, Butterflies stir our hearts in so many different meaningful ways.

[Frieda P]

Very meaningful for me doug, they remind me of my beloved sister, thank you.

[redflutterby]

Sigh....another beautiful message for your butterfly!! I know she hears each one. xo

[Frieda P]

I hope so Red, it's a sweet thought, thanks so much. xo

[Barbara Walker]

Very nice! Brought some beautiful pictures to mind!

[Frieda P]

Thanks Barbara, I'm so glad it did!

[Yellow Butterfly]

I love when you write about butterflys.....♥ this .... FP


YB

[Frieda P]

Thanks YB, doesn't surprise me. :-)

[Rita L. Sev]

Frieda, you should know that I think of you whenever I see a butterfly now, and send a prayer... This is a lovely homage to your butterfly...

[Frieda P]

You've truly touched my heart with that Rita, thanks so much.....

[Angi]

Beautiful, Frieda! I love them, too! Angi~

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly Angi...

[shallimarRose]

I love the thought of butterflies but i am terrified of moths.. go figure..
This poem just seemed to flutter as if on the very wing.. well done Frieda.. Rose

[Frieda P]

Very sweet review shallimar, thanks so much.