No Signal

No Signal

A Poem by Red_Queen

My Life support is cut.

My Connection is broken

No signal

We are alone in this.

but we feign happiness

Let's all plug ourselves in

To the wonderland

and escape the dreary that is

The real

Bathe my mind

in the false

Just let me get out

No signal

I want to close my eyes

To the rest of the world

and isolate myself in all this

Nothing

I need the facade of you

the illusion of compainionship

but i am trapped in my

blissful empty,

No signal.

© 2008 Red_Queen


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It was nice. i liked how you made it have a dark aloneness edge to it.
Feeling all is lost no help to pull you back, forget me forget them all.
Very clear great message through the words!

Posted 17 Years Ago


Sometimes silence and isolation are my only remedy as well. I like your abstract way of thinking.

Posted 17 Years Ago


no signal is a great concept. i enjoyed the piece very much. The image of feeling disconnected and how hard that can be. Yet once we get there we do not know if we have the strength to go back.
Thank you for sharing your work with WC.

peace,
Danielle

Posted 17 Years Ago


This is truly from within, unless I am wrong I can say you took it from your soul and written it with black and white?
Anyway thanks for being the first to comment on my lyrics, and I by mistake replayed you there about the "aint" part

All the best,
Tamer Qtaish

Posted 17 Years Ago



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