Hollowed Wing Flutter

Hollowed Wing Flutter

A Poem by Reddog19
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Just some random song that (somehow) turned rather religious... O.o

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Hollowed wings flutter
Through the night,
Masked by the scent
Of the dawning light.

Church bells, they ring,
Echoing rays
Of green, white, and purple
For holy days.

The water in streams
Runs deep from the earth.
The madness of hell
Shall now have rebirth.

Hollowed wings, they flutter,
Through the night,
Masked by the scent 
Of the dawning light.
Hollowed wings flutter
Away from sight.

Deep-rooted forests are wrenched from the ground,
That panic of people
As they race around,
Trying to find what little is left.
The madness of hell
Has come to a crest.

Hollowed wings, they flutter,
Through the night,
Masked by the scent
Of the dawning light.
Hollowed wings flutter
Away from sight.

Here It comes now!
Our Savior, Our King!
The mighty Lord God,
Salvation He brings!
On steeds of light
He races the night,
To save His people
From an abhorrent sight.

Hollowed wings, they flutter,
Through the night,
Masked by the scent 
Of the dawning light.
Hollowed wings flutter
Away from sight.

Hollowed wings, they flutter,
Through the night,
Now sharpened by the scent 
Of the Dawning Light.
Hollowed wings, they flutter,
Away from sight.

© 2014 Reddog19


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hmmm.. Im not too sure on how I should interpret this XD I see several ways, but I guess the most prominent one is the owing of gel where the peoples pleas are being ignored. It could also be twisted a bit and be saying that earth IS the hell and that god will not help us and he goes away from sight, which can also simply mean he is waiting and ignoring the humans temporarily. This one is a bit tougher because it can be a broad spectrum of interpretations really with small different lines that can be taken differently... But either way it was good^^) If it is about a god ignoring the please of their people, then i liked the irony of the church bells ringing for a holy day Xd what a way to bring about the apocalypse huh? Thank you for entering this, i enjoyed reading.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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hmmm.. Im not too sure on how I should interpret this XD I see several ways, but I guess the most prominent one is the owing of gel where the peoples pleas are being ignored. It could also be twisted a bit and be saying that earth IS the hell and that god will not help us and he goes away from sight, which can also simply mean he is waiting and ignoring the humans temporarily. This one is a bit tougher because it can be a broad spectrum of interpretations really with small different lines that can be taken differently... But either way it was good^^) If it is about a god ignoring the please of their people, then i liked the irony of the church bells ringing for a holy day Xd what a way to bring about the apocalypse huh? Thank you for entering this, i enjoyed reading.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 19, 2014
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