Emotion Secrets

Emotion Secrets

A Poem by Reina Love
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Emotions that i know if i say anything it will make things worse for everyone an thy self each part is about something or someone else but words i lately just lock away

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Ashamed i am, living this life of pain
Loss of love, when love knows no name
Confused i am, strolling this life swinging mood to mood
I am Woman, yet can hardly elude

Question i do, every word, move i make
Loss of love, when love knows no fake
Taken love they did, this bud of my heart frozen in time
I am Woman, this bud will melt as i make the climb

Frightened i am, unspoken words sealed shut
Loss of love, when love knows no lust 
Disgusted she maybe, if ever hear my truth
I am Woman, She is a crush of my youth

© 2015 Reina Love


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Reina Love
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It's amazing how powerful unspoken words can be. Emotions are scary, but worth revealing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Reina Love

6 Years Ago

Yep i agree
At first this poem gave me the notion that it was pertaining to a loss of a newborn. "Loss of love, when love knows no name, confused I am, strolling this life swinging mood-to-mood." How could something like that not click, you know? And then I continued to read on and saw, "taken love they did, this bud of my heart frozen in time" and I was committed to that notion. I assumed that the bud was the baby and its passing was, to you, like time frozen. And then the first line of the last stanza had it making more sense, how the loss of a child can leave you speechless, literally, never being able to tell anyone how much pain is associated with it. And then the last 3 lines took that all away. I LOVE THIS POEM! I was led to believe one idea and - BAM, I'm slapped with a polar opposite. Well done! 100/100 from me :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Reina Love

6 Years Ago

Haha funny thing is though the first part is actually not about a kid the second part is though but .. read more
Poetry is best when it's from the heart. Thanks for sharing your heartfelt work. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Reina Love

6 Years Ago

:) thanks Dawn
To me, all the rhymes sound forced. I'd like to see you write in free verse and not worry about rhyming.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Reina Love

6 Years Ago

Funny thing is i felt like one of those people who grew up with a bit of a talent that wasn't family.. read more
 Relic

6 Years Ago

Yes, I'm sure they do. Its funny how things tend to happen through a bloodline without our realizing.. read more
Reina Love

6 Years Ago

Ya totally haha :)
"Frightened i am, unspoken words sealed shut
Loss of love, when love knows no lust "
You expressed your views very boldly and were able to convey the message clearly.
Good work!
Maumil

Posted 6 Years Ago


Maumil Mehraj

6 Years Ago

Keep on writing, you are good at it :)
Reina Love

6 Years Ago

Awwwwwwww thank you that means so much to me you have no idea :)
Maumil Mehraj

6 Years Ago

aww!!no problem honey

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Added on April 17, 2015
Last Updated on June 22, 2015
Tags: Emotions, Taken, Love, Life, Child, Heartbroken

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Reina Love
Reina Love

Tacoma, WA



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(I HAVE A KIK ACCOUNT IF YOU WANT ASK ME FIRST CAUSE WHEN I SEE SOME RANDOM GUY I BLOCK THEM OTHERWISE I ONLY TALK TO GIRLS ON KIK)I'm still pretty much new to writing poems though I've been basically.. more..

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