THOUGHTS
A Poem by
Rene Velez
Sometimes I wonder what it would b e like to never have to worry about money, free to concentrate on my craft maybe tea and an afternoon breeze to accompany me A break from the everyday race, That breaks souls and pokes holes in the fabric of families Nothing would make me happier then to spend more time with my kids I never tire of their smile and laughter, happiness is my biggest prayer for them To what do you place importance? For me It's love, time is only a small
Window in a streaming living room filled with memories, we are reminded everyday by the sun and the moon that the end comes eventually, darkness
and then hopefully light will guide us home Maybe someday my words will outweigh the constraints of the living And I will be set free
© 2012 Rene Velez
Author's Note
Just random thoughts I put to words.
Reviews
We all need to recapture and retake our sense of community as the communes of the 1960's wanted to... forget the sex and free love...and drugs...outside the framework of extened familis /communities we can barter in our small towns for what we need...if only we begin again to ...DO IT?
Posted 12 Years Ago
and random thoughts Im sure we've all shared... this was a great read... you expressed well indeed!!
Posted 12 Years Ago
and random thoughts Im sure we've all shared... this was a great read... you expressed well indeed!!
A powerful piece of verse, simple expression I think. The simplest ideas usually leaves the biggest impression.
Posted 12 Years Ago
A powerful piece of verse, simple expression I think. The simplest ideas usually leaves the biggest impression.
Random yes, but a most stirring piece that leads the reader forth, well done, good read.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Random yes, but a most stirring piece that leads the reader forth, well done, good read.
Ren...this time you reached it man... this one - THIS one is your highmark... all that come after I will have to compare to this one... I'm honored you shared it.
Chris
Posted 12 Years Ago
Ren...this time you reached it man... this one - THIS one is your highmark... all that come after I will have to compare to this one... I'm honored you shared it.
Chris
Your words for now may just be living the life you want to..manifest your body, mind, and spirit to go in that same direction..xo ;)
Posted 12 Years Ago
Your words for now may just be living the life you want to..manifest your body, mind, and spirit to go in that same direction..xo ;)
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