THOUGHTS

THOUGHTS

A Poem by Rene Velez



Sometimes I wonder
what it would be like
to never have to worry about money, free to concentrate on my craft
maybe tea and an afternoon breeze
to accompany me

A break from the everyday race,
That breaks souls and pokes holes
 in the fabric of families
Nothing would make me happier
 then to spend more time with my kids
I never tire of their smile and laughter,
happiness is my biggest prayer for them

To what do you place importance?
For me It's love, time is only a small
Window in a streaming living room filled with memories,
we are reminded everyday by the sun and the moon
that the end comes eventually,
darkness and then hopefully light will guide us home

Maybe someday my words will outweigh
the constraints of the living
And I will be set free

© 2012 Rene Velez


Author's Note

Rene Velez
Just random thoughts I put to words.

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We all need to recapture and retake our sense of community as the communes of the 1960's wanted to... forget the sex and free love...and drugs...outside the framework of extened familis /communities we can barter in our small towns for what we need...if only we begin again to ...DO IT?

Posted 12 Years Ago


and random thoughts Im sure we've all shared... this was a great read... you expressed well indeed!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


A powerful piece of verse, simple expression I think. The simplest ideas usually leaves the biggest impression.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Random yes, but a most stirring piece that leads the reader forth, well done, good read.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Ren...this time you reached it man... this one - THIS one is your highmark... all that come after I will have to compare to this one... I'm honored you shared it.

Chris

Posted 12 Years Ago


Your words for now may just be living the life you want to..manifest your body, mind, and spirit to go in that same direction..xo ;)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on March 5, 2012
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Rene Velez
Rene Velez

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