soon

soon

A Poem by joshua deathdealer
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05/2011

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I am so ready to go home
our beautiful approximation
I cannot leave alone

my mind dwells on our reflection
purest sounds of our symphony
play upon the strings of my soul

this span of time holds no bars
or chains on my adoration
it blazes from me as if I were a star

hanging so high above, swept away in bliss
I cherish every moment spent with you
soon I will touch your face and wipe away all miss

all my roads lead to you

© 2011 joshua deathdealer


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joshua deathdealer
i <3 sherri deathdealer

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I think its actualy a very lovely peice hun
you can tell its somthing heartfelt and actualy meaningful
unlike others on here that writes purely because their head is so high
and so full of themselves they manages to pick up random words and put
it in a line and call it work? I loved it keep it up

Posted 9 Years Ago


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This is sooo cute.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

when the heart speaks.. the soul listens..

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very heartfelt. It was a good write, and it was very sweet.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so sweet!

I love the rhyme scheme too.

This is a fav.

xx

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nice. I din it very sweet and heart felt! Well done on your wonderful piece. C:

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Simply put this poem is a golden stream of emotional expression. So smooth and peaceful and loving. I love this line,
"my mind dwells on our reflection
purest sound of our symphony
play upon the strings of my soul
That's classic.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great sentiments. Absence makes the heart grow fonder. I especially liked the next to last line. Thanks.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

An attention seeking craft ... short and sweet ... Nice flow ... Great work :-)

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Wonderful...an absolutley perfect read. Is it any wonder people keep coming back to you?

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this was cute...I loved the gradual lengthening of lines...it seemed like gradual increase in your longing to meet her (that's just my comprehension though)...and the last line said it all though short "all my roads lead to you" :)

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Added on May 25, 2011
Last Updated on December 24, 2011
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Casket City, FL



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