On leaving

I don't want to go

away from you

It's my demons that taunt me here
They flout me, torture me,
wish me dead
Alone

That is why I have to go
That is why,
to save me
would mean

to leave you

Author's Note

Please be kind, I'm new in the field of poetry..

Reviews

[Wórdsmíth]

Very nice work. And as you`ve mentioned in your author`s note that you`re new at poetry then I must say, you`re very good at this.. you`ve to write some more great poems and with the time you`d be a great beautiful poetess across the world. I enjoyed reading this wonderful poem where the feelings of your love are well expressed in the beautiful strong words of faith. Wonderful write!! ;)

[Renee]

Thank you for your k ind words! Means a lot to me :)

[A. Amos]

I sense your feeling of being love addict and your fight within...simply amazing write. Bravo!

[Renee]

Thank you so much! :)

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome my friend

[Frieda P]

Bittersweet read, sometimes love just isn't enough, I love your use of 'flout'....enjoyed!

[Renee]

Thank you Frieda!

[Frieda P]

My pleasure Renee!

[Norah]

Great poem Renee.. it is tragic yet wonderful :)

[Renee]

Thank you Norah! :)